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Story: Froggy in Distress 
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: YumeHime ()
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ah, finally got the time to sit down and read. carefully XD
Tuna has really got a talent for writing~ 8D
Nice job~ wb
Though Yume though she'd enjoy it more if you've delved more into detail,
maybe split it into another chapter, or lengthening it :3
Add more portray into their thoughts and emotions. :D


The action here ish great~ keep up the great work~ wb